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Warm Portal
Let me enter in
through
your warm portal
eternally, as
a welcomed
friend—
not merely
mortal,
as a
wet guest
slipping in to sin.
-Paul Whiting
(a.k.a., Small All White in the Forest)
"I am no barrier to its sun; the light and I are as one!"
My Poetic Notes:
The reason that I wrote this poem can be summed up with the following statement: I feel like this poem has a great sensual connotation about it that I just love! And I wrote it because I was relating to Sandra—who was my first and only girlfriend—"in a special way," even though we weren't even married! And I wanted to convey the idea of being with her romantically and not just to "get off..."
Just so you know, I revised this poem, as I often do with my writing! And I changed how this poem was written when I was editing it on my "Paul Whiting — A Creative Writer" and "Small All White in the Forest" blogs. So, I wanted to show you how this poem used to be written, before I revised it as above.
And it used to be written like this:
Warm Portal
Let me enter in
and pass
through
your warm portal
eternally as
a welcomed
friend
not mortal
as a
wet guest
slipping in to sin.
Thus, I revised this poem to be written as it is above.
And this poem was also published on my "Paul Whiting — A Creative Writer" blog (please see the hyperlink below for the blog), since I feel that the message in this poem applies to the message that I am trying to convey through "Paul Whiting — A Creative Writer."
This poem was written in Salt Lake City, Utah.
-Paulee
https://paulwhitingwriting.blogspot.com
This "Small All White in the Forest" Post No. 013 was edited on September 7th, 2023.
"Poetry is using the fewest words possible in order to describe all that is possible to describe." –Paul Whiting [June 1st, 2022]
